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Autumn Competition

November 6th, 2013 · 34 Comments · Uncategorized

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Welcome to our first writing competition of this term. Have a look at the pictures of some Autumn changes below. Can you write a 2A sentence about one of the pictures in the next two weeks? This competition is open to both Key Stage 1 and Key Stage 2 children. Remember to choose your adjectives very carefully. You could be the winner of 60 house points, 30 merits and a surprise gift.

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34 Comments so far ↓

  • gabko

    iam gabko in 2t ☺☺☺

  • sumaiya 2t

    Late one cold evening, whilst hiding from my friend in the stony, deep and crowded forest, all of a sudden I saw a shiny, shimmering and bright sparkle in the corner of my eye. What could it have been? Was it a wand, a sun or a star fallen from the sky? I went a little more closer and there in my amazment I saw leaves hanging on to branches as thin as a single hair and as and as the leaves one by one were slowly falling down on the muddy, wet and leafy ground I gathed a pile of leaves in my hand and threw them in the air. It was the best moment of the day.

  • sumaiya

    I am in 2t

  • Leah and sajeda

    The mighty,overweight tree is wooshing in the breezy,cold wind.

  • Ayesha and sajeda

    The crunchy,orange leaves fell on the hard ,stoney ground.

  • ansar

    the crispy,luminiouse leaves fell on the dirty, cold water

  • Hafsah

    the kind lovely girl wore a shiny ring

  • pranit

    Picture1-
    While I was taking a stroll in the woodlands I saw the shimmering, luminous Sun shine glimmeringly in the gloaming, amber Autumn breeze.

    Picture2-
    In the Autumn days
    People are being amazed by yellow, brown leaves
    Swirling, twirling on the ground
    Sparkling raindrops falling all around.

    Picture3-
    One windy Autumn day
    Golden, crispy leaves are swinging down
    Making a crunchy, strewn carpet
    On the ground.

  • Malaika 4c

    The crunchy, dry leafs were on the stoney, hard ground in my backyard.

  • emil gujda

    The trees are beautiful and the wind windering the sun rise and I said i never ever so this fantistik sun rise

  • nedas st

    As I saw colofull tree whit a sun riss bihind it. 🙂

  • nedas st

    When I open my eyes I saw a tree , bihind there was a beatyfull sun riss. 🙂

  • saniya and regina

    The dry cruchy leaves fell gently on to the rocky solid ground as it covered it like a banket.

  • Zohaib 5C

    The firey crunchy leaves floated on the ground like tickleisg feathers.